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  1. Caroline on a mission. Not even Darcy or Charles would DARE get in her way now. Wow! I knew Lydia was rude when she spoke up and requested the ball. However, I didn’t realize just how rude. You would think Mrs. Bennet [who was a noted hostess] would have realized the inconvenience of the date. She would have been in a nervous twit had she that short of a timeline to prepare for a ball of that size. Not having entertained on that level, perhaps she didn’t realize the time crunch. I doubt she had entertained her four and twenty families all at the same time. Yep, both mother and daughter were excessively rude. Looking forward to seeing this Mr. Westmorland.

  2. I’m enjoying being in Caroline’s head – perhaps a bit nicer than I typically think of her, but definitely out for her own self as usual. I look forward to reading Part 2.

  3. The machinations of Caroline’s mind are quite a study! I can see why Charles would balk at the bills a bit–300 beeswax candles would not come cheaply! But Charles agreed to the ball, so he must pay the price…literally this time.

    Looks like quite the intriguing story! I wonder why Caroline seems to have given up on Darcy already, though…that doesn’t seem much like her usual tenacity.

    Thanks for a fun first chapter!!

    Warmly,
    Susanne 🙂

    • I’m not sure I see a great deal of tenacity in Caroline in Austen’s original work. She doesn’t really appear after they all go to London. I wonder if we may read too much into the text there. But that’s just my musings.

  4. This is a very interesting take on Caroline Bingley – fanfiction often makes her behaving wrongly in all aspects, including lack of appreciation /abuse of servants. I very much like this practical aspect of her making the Netherfield Ball a well organized entertainment. And the remark about her seeing Darcy’s rejection is also anti-fanon but gives me hope to see her redeemed in this story!

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