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  1. And that scene was cut? Oh my goodness!!
    Can not wait to read this book in it’s entirety!
    Well done Maria!

    • Thanks, Carol! I was really kind of annoyed when I started on the scene after this and realized that this particular one really wasn’t necessary. I was on a tight schedule trying to get it done before my father had surgery and I hated having wasted the time writing something I didn’t need. LOL

      • Even if it didn’t make it into the book, I’m glad you shared it here. Can’t get enough of the human-dragon interactions.

  2. A wonderful scene!! I can see why it would need to be cut because it gives away too much, taking the suspense out of the Conclave scene. And the info about Wickham can easily be added into one of the first scenes in Book Three.

    It’s a sweet scene, though, and I very much enjoyed it. I’m re-reading Longbourn right now, and they had just arrived in London with Pemberley, so this scene fit in almost exactly with my re-reading of the book. (I just finished re-reading the first book and had to continue to the second book, too. 😉

    Thanks for sharing it with us!!

    Warmly,
    Susanne 🙂

  3. Interesting that Matlock had to have him sign the document…his final comment was interesting too. Can’t wait for the 3rd book!!!!!

  4. We are sorry this chapter was deleted because it has some really cute bits in it. We like Fitzwilliam being cheeky to his father, and my little girls always like the Pemberley bits. Livi (11) wants you to draw a picture of April please, in colour.
    I am sorry to hear about your father. I hope he is recovering well.
    We are truly delighted with this series Maria. It is such an original idea and far more interesting than any of the other P&P adaptations I have yet read. We are impatiently waiting the third book in the series. 1;^)]

    • I can’t attach a picture here, but I’ll see what I can send you via email. I am no artist though! I’m so delighted your girls are enjoying it.

      • You sell yourself short! That art work is worthy of a cover for book three… or four!
        I was really fun to see the REAL Rumplekins too. It is an excellent name for such a magnificent looking animal 😉
        Love from Esther and the New Zealand branch of your fan club.

        • Thanks so much Esther! It’s always an exciting moment when the real Rumblekins purrs. He’s not a very purry creature-yet-and when he rewards us with a purr, it feels like a real honor! LOL

  5. I just read the whole dragon entail series, then tonight this deleted scene and my favourite line is: ‘Rosings though did mention she would like to bite Anne.’
    I’m sure many of us would like to bite both this Anne and several versions of Lady Catherine, although I would prefer to use someone else’s teeth!

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