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  1. I love this stronger and assertive Charles Bingley!
    To London for a haircut?! This is a great use of this allusion.

    Although this is an alternate universe (where Caroline didn’t – yet??? – arrange Jane’s disappointment over Charles’s leaving) it feels like her getting her comeuppance for this manipulation in canon by having to taste the same disappointment when Mr. Westmoreland left.

    I really look forward to seeing where all this is going! Thank you for posting this story!

  2. Good for Charles! Refusing to tell Caroline his business! Also it’s obvious Mr Westmorland is not exactly rushing to see her. (Maybe he’s going to the Bennets 🙂 )
    Now it just needs Darcy to refuse to ‘help’ her and all will be good.

  3. Ok. We are a more forceful Charles but how long before he capitulated to the combination of his sisters and Darcy? I’m not holding my breath. I’m wondering why Westmoreland is leaving so soon after the ball. Hmmm. Perhaps Caroline didn’t meet his standard?

  4. Way to go Charles. As the head of your family, you certainly don’t have to answer to your sister or explain yourself. Be the man… be the man… just keep saying that. I detected Caroline’s tone with a bit of panic to it. I do believe she is about to get a taste of how Jane felt in the canon account when Charles left Netherfield and didn’t return for many months. I almost want to say bless her heart; however, I won’t. But then, where is Darcy?

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