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What happens when Mr. and Mrs. Darcy, Colonel Fitzwilliam and Mr. Bennet find themselves snowbound at Hartfield with Sir Walter and Miss Elizabeth Elliot? Why romance of course!

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Snowbound at Hartfield

 

Colonel Fitzwilliam should have been happy facing retirement. No more Napoleon, no more tromping the Continent, and his distant cousin had unexpectedly left him an estate. What was more, two of his favorite people, Darcy and Elizabeth, were travelling with him to visit his new home.

 

But the colonel wasn’t happy, not when he was forced to watch Darcy exchanging enamored glances with his wife. No, he wanted to pitch his cousin out the window. It didn’t help when Darcy kept lecturing him on the joys of wedded life— as if women like Elizabeth Darcy grew on every tree.

 

Then the snow started.

 

Now they were stranded at the home of George and Emma Knightley, another intolerable, blissfully wedded couple who wanted nothing more than to see his bachelor days come to an end. Thank heavens they never thought of matching him with the proud spinster who had also been caught in the storm. That would have been utterly intolerable.

 

Or would it?


 

Elizabeth Elliot’s maid secured a final curl with a pin and tucked a bit of ribbon into her coiffure. “Is this what you wanted, Miss?”

The affected French accent was annoying, but it allowed both of them to maintain the illusion that she could afford a French maid.

Elizabeth examined her profile in the mirror and patted her hair. “Yes, yes, that is very good.”

“Will there be anything else, madam? Your wool shawl perhaps?” She tucked the shawl around Elizabeth’s shoulders.

“Yes, that will do nicely. You may go now.” She rose and stepped back until she could see her entire reflection.

Her posture was still perfect, as elegant and columnar as a fashion plate. Her gown was several seasons from being the height of fashion, but the current company did not seem the type to take notice of that fact, especially if she wore it well.

Winds raged outside, but the guest room was warm and snug. Yes, it was furnished rather plainly, but plain and well-maintained had become increasingly appealing.

How Anne would laugh if she knew.

She turned this way and that. Her skirt swished, the candlelight glinting off the deep blue fabric. It looked very well in the evening light. Was it foolish to look forward to the company this evening? A dinner without pretense, without concern for being in the right company, without the sense of performing for an unknown audience—when was the last time that had happened?

All their social engagements in Bath had been about making connections, being seen with connections, being good connections. Never about being good company or enjoying good company. That concern evaporated with William Elliot’s defection to Penelope.

After all this time, one would think his name would not still raise a pang in her heart. But one would be wrong.

Lady Russell had been correct. Anne should have been enough company for her.

But Anne was dull; she did not care for company, and she was ever going on about budgets and economy. Penelope enjoyed shopping and parties and always agreed with her. Of course she would choose her friend over her sister.

What a mistake.

Had Anne been there in Bath from the beginning, Mr. Elliot would never have met Penelope. Even if he had formed an attachment to Anne, it would have ended in their marriage. Anne would never have been set up as a mistress. While it would have been her younger sister established as mistress of Kellynch, eyebrows would be raised, but it all would have been respectable and without scandal.

She sat on the edge of the bed and dabbed her eyes with her handkerchief.

It all could have been prevented.

She knew better now. Would her vow to listen to advice, even unpleasant advice, make any difference? Would Providence approve her pledge to value mundane qualities like honesty, constancy, and activity matter at all? If only she could prove her earnestness. Surely that would count in her favor, would it not?

These new acquaintances offered the perfect opportunity. They did not know her. She could be the new woman she believed herself to be—one Anne and Lady Russell might approve of—at least a little.

But Father could ruin it all with his … pompous attitudes.

There, she had said the word.

Pompous. Pretentious. Arrogant. Haughty.

Yes, he was titled and in possession—after a fashion—of a lovely country seat. That entitled him to a certain amount of pride, but since they had been forced to leave Kellynch and retrench, his pride had transformed into something more. Something dark and poisonous that tainted every social engagement and even threatened to turn him against her. If something did not change soon, they might well find themselves entirely unwelcome in good company. Worse, he could decide she was no longer a social asset and no longer welcome in his home.

Then what?

All the more reason not to waste the opportunity before her.

She checked the mirror one more time and left.

***

“Brush the coat again.” Fitzwilliam pulled off the garment and handed it back to his valet.

“As you say, sir.” Which was to say he thought it utterly unnecessary, but knew better than to speak it aloud.

That was good enough.

He checked his cravat in the mirror, unchanged from its state moments ago. Just a bit of a tug to straighten the crease. Not quite as perfect as the baronet’s, but it would do.

Sir Walter’s cravat might have been sketched for a valet’s guidebook. Perhaps the baronet’s man could give his own a few pointers.

“Your coat, sir.”

He shrugged the coat over his shoulders and fastened the buttons while staring in the mirror. He turned to the side and examined his profile. Still a passable figure. Not the young man who had left for the army years ago but still respectable. Not fit for a dandy, but that was hardly a desirable image, either.

It was enough.

It was all he had.

With a final tug to his sleeves, he left.

Liza peered out of the hall window, Darcy standing—no, hovering—behind her. Besotted, utterly besotted.

Since his marriage, he rarely permitted much distance between them and did not appreciate it when it was enforced. Mother had made that mistake—once.

Fitzwilliam would have lost his meager fortune betting that Darcy would never be so taken by a woman. Apparently impossible things did happen, at least on occasion.

Winds howled on the other side of the glass, blowing away the tidy mounds of snow that had gathered on the mullions.

“I do not recall ever seeing snowfall like this.” Liza turned away from the window and tucked the curtain back into place. “I fear the storm is growing worse.”

 “I expect we may have to impose upon Hartfield’s hospitality another day at least. I would certainly not permit guests to travel under such conditions and cannot imagine Knightley doing differently.” Darcy straightened his coat.

Fitzwilliam strode toward them. “I imagine it will be at least several days before it is safe to travel again.”

Darcy grumbled under his breath.

“I know you do not like delay, but I see little alternative.” She slipped her hand into Darcy’s crooked arm.

 “Now you see the value of a broad acquaintance, eh Darcy?” He tilted his head and winked. “Without it, we could be spending the evening and the day ahead at an inn.”

“And if we had relied upon your broad acquaintance, we would be.” Darcy’s eyebrow rose.

Liza snickered under her breath. Darcy would never have made such a remark prior to meeting her. Now he was acting—or at least starting to act—like a Fitzwilliam brother. It took some getting used to.

Perhaps that was part of the reason Father liked Liza so. Even Mother conceded she had her amenable qualities.

She urged them toward the stairs.

Knightley met them in the still over-warm parlor where the Elliots and Bennet awaited. A bead of sweat trickled down the side of Sir Walter’s face.

Bennet sported that look he wore around Collins. Did he find Sir Walter as amusing—or as annoying—as Collins? Either was equally possible. Could there be two such ridiculous men in England?

“Mrs. Knightley has already taken her father into the dining room. Shall we follow?” Knightley gestured toward the door.

Mr. Woodhouse sat comfortably at the foot of the table, a loin of pork nearby. Mrs. Knightley presided at the head of the table and acquainted her guests with the various dishes as they sat down.

Her staff deserved praise for pulling together a worthy menu in spite of the short notice and weather, which must have prevented garnering additional supplies. How much credit was due to the housekeeper and how much to Mrs. Knightley? Despite her apparent youth, perhaps there was more to her than first glance would suggest.

Even Sir Walter did not turn up his nose at the courses before him. What greater praise might there be?

Mr. Woodhouse shaved an irregular slice off the pork, his hand shaking so much it was a wonder that the meat was the only thing he cut. He handed Knightley the cutlery. Mrs. Knightley breathed a sigh of relief.

So did Liza.

Someone had once told him that the Chinese did not place knives on the dinner table because it was not a place for weapons. Perhaps they had a point.

A footman brought a plate of gruel and placed it before Mr. Woodhouse.

He leaned back a bit and smiled. “Would anyone else like a plate? Mr. Bennet, Sir Walter, perhaps? My cook makes a most tolerable gruel.”

“Gruel, sir?” Sir Walter’s nose wrinkled.

“Indeed, most healthful for the digestion, you know. I do not at all understand the appeal of so large a meal so late in the day.”

“Your concern for our health is most gracious.” Bennet took several slices of pork. “I imagine, Sir Walter, you do not indulge in a great deal of gruel.”

The footman brought the platter of pork to Sir Walter. “By no means, I think it only appropriate for the sick room.”

Miss Elliot gasped and colored. She sipped her wine, probably to hide her face.

“I imagine it provides a soothing respite from the taxing variety of rich menus.” How did Bennet keep a straight face saying such a thing?

“It does indeed, sir.” Woodhouse lifted a trembling spoon.

“Whilst that might be so,” Fitzwilliam caught Miss Elliot’s eye and gestured to the nearby platters. She nodded, and he served her dainty portions of each. “I am still of a mind and appetite to prefer heartier victuals.”

“Young men usually are,” Woodhouse murmured over his spoon.

“I suppose your refined connections influence your tastes.” Bennet lifted his wineglass toward Fitzwilliam.

“More likely his stays in His Majesty’s army.” Knightley tipped his head. “I have heard officers enjoy very sophisticated tastes.”

Fitzwilliam snorted and rolled his eyes.

Best refrain from further comment.

“Now that you have an estate, will you continue in the army?” Miss Elliot asked.

“I had thought to stay in until I became a general—it is so much finer a title than colonel.”

Liza and Darcy exchanged creased-brow glances. Perhaps that level of sarcasm was not necessary. Miss Elliot had no idea of his experiences nor his opinions.

“In my opinion, colonel is quite as fine a rank as a naval captain. Quite as acceptable. My daughter is married to a Captain Wentworth, brother to Admiral Croft, you know. Excellent connections, both of them.”

But then again, in the baronet’s company, perhaps a healthy dose of sarcasm was essential. “I am pleased you approve of my rank, but I doubt I will retain it much longer. I expect I will have to sell out soon to manage Listingbrook.”

“Will you miss the army?” Was Miss Elliot trying to antagonize him? Her expression seemed very sincere but …

“I think not.” Enough said.

Quite enough.

Sir Walter drained his wineglass and piled more pork on his plate. “I should think a young man like yourself would miss the rigors of military life.”

“But it is so dangerous. How could a sensible man relish that?” Woodhouse’s spoon clattered against his plate.

“Do you miss the quiet of country life now that you are in the smart society of Bath?” Bless Bennet for distracting the conversation.

“Not at all.” Sir Walter sniffed.

Of course, after being forced to retrench, he could hardly admit dissatisfaction, could he?

“At times, I do.” Miss Elliot looked away.

Sir Walter’s eyes bulged, and his face flushed. He did that a great deal. Perhaps he should consult an apothecary about whatever condition caused it.

“So much society can be exhausting at times. Sometimes one longs for the quietude of one’s own home.” Miss Elliot pushed bits of potato around her plate.

She dared disagree with her father in company? The woman had a spine.

Singular, indeed.

“Is that what brings you here to the quiet of our fine countryside?” Knightley gestured for the footman to refill the wineglasses.

Sir Walter pulled himself up a little straighter, his nose in the air. “We are on our way to visit our cousins the Dalrymples at their home. The Dowager Lady and her daughter.”

Miss Elliot’s lip curled as she sipped her wine. Her father might not have seen the gesture, but Fitzwilliam did. He had little affection for the Dalrymples. They had no sense of humor to note. What did Miss Elliot dislike about them?

Mr. Woodhouse dabbed his chin with his napkin. “I do not think much of traveling to see people. Travel occasions all manner of danger from weather and highwaymen and accidents. Oh, I read of the most dreadful accident involving a post coach recently.”

“I believe I read the same account. Entirely shocking. You might be surprised to hear I do not favor travel myself. It is only that my son Darcy is so persuasive that I am here at all.” Bennet winked at Liza.

“Please do not mistake my father’s reticence for travel to suggest you are in any way unwelcome. We do enjoy entertaining guests so very much.” Mrs. Knightley rang a silver bell for the servants. “Shall we ladies repair to the drawing room and allow the men their port?” She rose and led the ladies out.

Miss Elliot trailed half a step behind, shoulders straight and chin up. She really did have an elegant figure.

 



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    • Liziris on November 2, 2017 at 4:04 am
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    I yen a Kindle copy, and it is funy, warm. A book Jane Austen might have enjoyed👍

  1. I loved reading along as you were posting the chapters, and believe it or not, have not bought this book yet! I would love to win the ebook for free! Thank you for this opportunity!

    • Mary on November 2, 2017 at 4:42 am
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    Poor Colonel Fit! The only batchelor among the group,Miss Elliott the only unmarried lady. She seems to have learned a valuable lesson from the recent past and is not as entrenched in her proud and haughty ways,unlike her father.
    Would she and Richard make each other happy? At this stage in their lives they may the final opportunity for such.
    I’d love to read this story and see what befalls Richard and Eluzabeth.

    • Glynis on November 2, 2017 at 5:29 am
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    What a lovely book this is. I never believed I could feel sorry for Elizabeth Elliot until I read this. At least I could still detest Sir Walter who was as obnoxious and self important as ever. Luckily his daughter seems to have seen the error of her ways. Thanks for sharing this reminder Maria.

    • Ann on November 2, 2017 at 6:01 am
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    Lovely entertaining extract – Maria. I enjoyed reading it and look forward to reading the entire book. Sir Walter seems as snobbish as ever and I love reading Mr Woodhouse offering gruel to all the guests and none of them partaking and Mr Bennet commenting that gruel must be a safe dish after the variety of rich meals. Thank you

    • Vesper on November 2, 2017 at 6:20 am
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    I loved the story (have a kindle copy)

    • J. W. Garrett on November 2, 2017 at 8:01 am
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    I already have a copy… do not include me in the give-a-way. I just wanted to respond that I was amazed at this story. I loved it. I could not see the connection between the two main characters, but ‘our author’ did a brilliant job of showing two people lost in the world finding each other. Man… it so worked. You can see just a glimpse of their hurt and longing in this excerpt. Well done Maria Grace… well done.

    • Miriam Bresticker on November 2, 2017 at 8:39 am
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    I enjoyed reading along when you originally posted it last year. Have not yet bought the ebook, thanks for the chance to win a free copy!

    • DarcyBennett on November 2, 2017 at 12:05 pm
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    Really enjoyed reading these chapters as they were being posted last year. Thanks for the giveaway!

    • Linda A. on November 2, 2017 at 12:34 pm
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    I followed along when you posted the chapters earlier and greatly enjoyed it. It is always nice to see a character that learns from their mistakes. Thank you for a chance to win a copy!

    • Suzanne on November 2, 2017 at 3:12 pm
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    Very intriguing! It is a truth, universally acknowledged, that Fitzwilliam deserves as much happiness as Fitzwiliam Darcy.

      • LongbournHouse on November 3, 2017 at 6:21 pm
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      Hi Suzanne – I agree. It is lovely to see Fitzwillwilliam’s friendship to Darcy finally being rewarded. We knew he was a good man. Cheers

    • Mariam on November 2, 2017 at 8:39 pm
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    What an interesting story line! I love it.

      • Greer Kathleen on November 22, 2017 at 12:00 am
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      Enjoyed your chapter portraying Colonel Fitzwilliam finding Elizabeth Elliot in the snow Had thought that Jane Austen should have given him a love interest in the original book Looking forward to reading the rest

    • Leanne Chavis on November 6, 2017 at 6:59 pm
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    That looks quite intriguing:)

    • Greer Kathleen on November 22, 2017 at 12:05 am
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    You have captured the spirit of Jane Austen. Looking forward to reading the rest

  2. The excerpt is entertaining, Maria. I am loving this story already. And a mash-up of P&P, Emma and Persuasion! This is quite a treat for me.

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