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  1. Very well done, but I caught some typos.

    Lydia’s WONTON behavior? As in soup….oh dear.

    And four lines down. “I would have though” should be thought.

    As to the content – yes, Mary will get some much-needed compassion from her sisters. Yes!

  2. Mary, I do so agree with you. Mrs. Bennet is in full denial but if she admits Lydia was wanton than all these years while she favored Lydia over all would have to be atoned for and Mrs. Bennet is not one who admits she is wrong. Thanks for this excerpt.

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