Half Agony, Half Hope: A New Free Book

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Half Agony, Half Hope: Scenes from Jane Austen’s Persuasion, by Maria Grace

I saw a painting recently and it inspired a bit of flash fiction. Since it is related to a new free book project, it seemed the perfect way to announce it. I have a new free book: Half Agony, Half Hope: Scenes from Jane Austen’s Persuasion available for download. Click the book cover here or in the sidebar to get the file.

Here’s a snippet to whet your appetite.





An End to Bad News


C_L_Becker_Das_Neueste_vom_Liebsten“Mrs. Smith, a letter just come for you,” Nurse Rook called, shambling into the cramped, dark parlor. “Not through the post mind you, so there weren’t no pennies to pay. Don’t be fearing for your purse none. No, the boy who brung it was dressed right clean and proper.”

Mrs. Smith took the letter, hands trembling. The rest of her body quivered in time. Nurse took her arm and guided her to a stool by the fire.

Yes, the heat would help stop the shaking, at least enough to read.

But did the want to?

She expected no correspondence and the hand look much like the solicitor’s. His letters always brought bad news: further proof of Mr. Elliot’s treachery and Mr. Smith’s foolishness in trusting him.

If only—

No, if only solved nothing, and it tormented her soul, stealing the last vestiges of her strength. One more luxury she could ill afford.

The fire crackled with an offer to take the letter from her, unread. It well-knew she had not the strength to take in any more bad news. What difference would she make if she read it or not? Reading it would not change the state of her affairs, and it would make no difference in her behavior. There were no more measures of economy to be taken. Not knowing, for just a little while longer, might preserve her mettle just a bit.

Nurse Rook nudged her shoulder. “Well?”

Just a few months ago she would have accepted the fire’s offer, but today … it was different.  Sometimes thing can change, unexpectedly and suddenly. Anne had smiled at her Captain Wentworth when she had said that.

And things had changed. She was no longer alone. She had friends now, friends that would not turn their backs no matter how desperate her circumstances. With their support, she could face this, whatever it was. The flames could sate their hunger from the coal bucket.

She held her breath and tugged away the seal. The pages came loose and her hands protested, quaking. They doubted she was strong enough for more bad news and turned the words into an indecipherable blur.

She dropped the paper on her lap and shoved her hands under her thighs.

Strong, bold loops formed words.

Mrs. Smith,

I am not a man to stand by idly whilst one who has done me great good suffers ill-fortune. Thus, I have taken it upon myself to manage those affairs left undone by your late husband’s death. I can offer no assurances, but know I will pursue you interests as vigorously as though they were my own.

Cpt. F. W.

A cry tore from her throat and her head swam. Such friends she had, such friends! She tried to rise, but her knees failed her.

Perhaps good news required great strength as well.


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    • Deborah on August 10, 2015 at 9:49 am
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    How beautiful. I feel as though I am sitting there watching the scene. Thank you so very much for this wonderful story. 🙂

    1. Thanks, Deborah! So glad you’re enjoying it!

    • Pam Hunter on August 10, 2015 at 10:36 am
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    Thank you so much, Maria! Just lovely!

    1. Thank you, Pam! I’ve always had a soft spot for Mrs. Smith.

    • Sheila L M on August 10, 2015 at 11:55 am
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    I would love to read more about the aid Frederick gives her. Dear lady that she is to Anne. Thanks for the free download.

    1. You’re very welcome, Sheila!

  1. Thank you very much, I love Persuasion!

    1. Glad to be able to share it with you, Carmen. Persuasion is one of my favorites too!

    • Suzan on August 10, 2015 at 6:13 pm
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    Lovely snippet. I have always liked mrs. Smith. The description of her in Persuasion showed what an honorable person she is etc. I’m glad to see you have taken up her cause. I so look forward to reading the whole thing.

    1. Thanks, Suzan. Jane Austen included the idea that Wentworth helped Mrs. Smith, but I think it gets a little lost in the romance of Anne and Wenthworth finally getting together. It was fun bringing it out.

  2. Just finished. I loved it! It was like watching deleted scenes! I liked the style and the fact that the book made me think about Lady Russell’s motivations.
    Thank you for this “reunion” with the characters of Persuasion.

    • Sheila L. M. on September 24, 2015 at 11:06 pm
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    I just re-read the free offering/download again and must say it was delightful to read the various points of view. Just so lovely as a filler to Jane Austen’s book. Smiles at the poignant ending. Well done.

  1. […] This story aims to fill in the gaps in Persuasion, rather than re-imagine the novel. My favorite scene was toward the end, when Anne, Lady Russell, and Elizabeth are discussing Anne’s upcoming marriage, and Captain Wentworth shows up and offers his opinion when Elizabeth attempts to persuade Anne against getting married before her. That was a laugh-out-loud moment! (This book is available for free on the author’s website.) […]

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